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Walking the Maze
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Walking the Maze |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I am the guide into the Labyrinth Leading the paths Through the fog Through the rain Through the frozen wastelands of time Spanning the ages Beyond the reason Beyond the flame Gathering the flock of the lost souls Warming my love Into my heart Into my soul I am the guide to the Labyrinth Follow my lead Into my life Into my home I was reading some of Jim Morrison's poetry this evening, and the line "I am the guide to the labyrinth" struck a chord... this is the result. In the wooden chair |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, Ringo, is the guide to the in and out of life... you did a great job here... of working the young throughout the maze... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes glad you were reading and got inspired Ringo love the format and the theme of this, and the ending is just perfect |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thanks again for all of your kind words. I think I might actually get the hang of this writing thing someday. lol In the wooden chair |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I can appreciate the words They have meant so much to people that even those who have never heard of him, utter his words One book even has his singing and person as a main character Good words Dave |
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