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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-03-27 04:16 PM




Open Letter

Dear God,

Your gifts are greater than any written word.

On this day, this very day of Ascension
I pray.

I pray for a stop to farce, inhumanity, and uncaring.
I pray so hard for so many things, I am befuddled…

for it seems Hell has visited Earth.

Children starve; others sue for their obesity.
Parental arguing splits the lives of their children,
who were conceived in love.
Commercial expenditures exceed the number of people
who sanctify and observe holy days,

even as we question, where is the morality?

There is so much more…

Dear God, I pray

for the spiritual leaders to correctly guide again;
for the political leaders to find Your source;
for the time when religion and politics can live
side by side
and not be fractured by discourse.

I pray for a strong nuclear family,
where mothers and fathers are free to discipline
accordingly;
take a stand in their children’s lives
because they want to;
and acknowledge their mistakes
to You.

I would not have You paint us a picture of purity
without knowing our worthiness.

My thoughts lend to the inner knowledge that You forgive us for so much.

If we are in Your image…does this tell me that You, too, sought a Higher Power?

For aren’t we all under the microscope of scrutiny?

If not by You, then those who would claim Your powers?

If we are to find justice, then we must look to a Just and Able source;
for somewhere there streamed a river, diverging
into Right and Wrong.

And sometimes I believe you hope we all know how to float.

Dear God,

I pray.

Open my mind to other alternatives, guide my hands,
make me Your vessel of hope, lead me to visions that would correct
one wrong.

Then multiply me.

Amen.

~*~


© Karilea Rilling
Easter
March 27, 2005


© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-03-27 04:40 PM


Sissie

So much pondering in this....and the weight of your prayers is heavy with the deepest of thought.  This:

"If we are in Your image…does this tell me that You, too, sought a Higher Power?"

very interesting and made me think....and this:

"Open my mind to other alternatives, guide my hands,
make me Your vessel of hope, lead me to visions that would correct
one wrong.

Then multiply me."

is so beautifully you!     



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2 posted 2005-03-27 04:43 PM


you are already more than one here Mama K

very touching letter, I am keeping

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-27 06:23 PM


you are beautiful Sunshinygirl

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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4 posted 2005-03-27 08:03 PM


Your prayer and mine.
Great job!!!

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Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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5 posted 2005-03-28 08:29 AM


AMEN!

In God's Book of life, under the name of Karilea, it says, Nature's Congeniality...a gift to mankind...

Incredible write lady!!!

Hugs and Happy Easter

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6 posted 2005-03-28 08:49 AM


"Dear God,

I pray.

Open my mind to other alternatives, guide my hands,
make me Your vessel of hope, lead me to visions that would correct
one wrong.

Then multiply me.

Amen."

~ Amen! Amen! Amen! Hallelujah for souls like yours, Dear Rising Sun! The world would be a glorious place if there were more spirit flowers such as you! Stand up and multiply!

Love & God's Light,
Linda

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7 posted 2005-03-28 08:59 AM


Karilea, my feelings exactly.
This is so beautiful, Karilea....and so YOU.
I hope you never change, sweet lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2005-03-28 09:22 AM


Amen...
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9 posted 2005-03-28 09:27 AM


Amen...
so do I...


Momma K?



You shine.....

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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10 posted 2005-03-28 09:50 AM


Beautiful. hugs precious lady. Chrislane

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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11 posted 2005-03-28 12:38 PM


If only more shared your caring heart... Amen.
Larry C
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12 posted 2005-03-28 07:27 PM


Dear Karilea,
From the heart of a tender woman who gives much of what she prays for. Bless you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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13 posted 2005-03-28 11:57 PM


your own gitanjali

be well.

-majnu
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Bridget Shenachie
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14 posted 2005-03-29 12:15 PM


It's difficult to comprehend a God so powerful that He doesn't burn out.  I, for one, am grateful that He doesn't take vacations, tho' at times it seems like He did.  

The world's a mess, ain't it, my friend?  I thank God, for you, Karilea, to help me find what is right with the world.

Great Write!
Shenachie

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15 posted 2005-03-29 12:16 PM


Sunshine, you just gave me an idea about the Word, and the words. I'm going to go write it.

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16 posted 2005-03-29 02:21 AM


Nice...James
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17 posted 2005-03-30 12:05 PM


correct one wrong -- yes... the word's of Lincoln come to mind -- not that God is on OUR side, but pray that we are on God's..
Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 2005-03-30 01:46 AM


Dear Lord I pray,
That weary travellers such as I will be led to poetry such as this, that transcends the meaning of poetry, that pays honor to the glory of thy name, that places a footprint before us that will help cradle our faltering steps toward the good of humanity, poetry that touches our senses and our hearts, that  turns our eyes from the realm of  politics to a higher realm of thought and our hearts to a deeper level of love.
Amen
Amen

Suetang
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19 posted 2005-03-30 02:36 AM


Such a powerful write you have given us, Karilea, with much food for thought.  I hope you are well.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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20 posted 2005-03-30 02:11 PM


Dear God I pray You grant this request

amen

JL
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21 posted 2005-03-30 02:20 PM


"Dear God,

I pray.

Open my mind to other alternatives, guide my hands,
make me Your vessel of hope, lead me to visions that would correct
one wrong.

Then multiply me.

Amen."

AMEN....AMEN....AMEN

Beautiful.

JL


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