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There Was Awareness
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There Was Awareness |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Before there was light there was need, before there was life there was a seed of memory when you held my hand and along the sand we walked as gods, in the fleeting moments of awareness, even as a child, in my thoughts and dreams I felt your breath upon my throat, your heartbeat in my soul. ©2005 by icebox |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox And so the breeze played, enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox People usually think of memory as thought of something that has already taken place, but you have helped me see that it can also be awareness of the future. In the circle that is time, it makes sense to me. Thank you.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It makes me think that all things are inherent in genetics...heredity, and instinct. Very good...thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is so well done - striking - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A timely topic, for sure, and well said! ...jo |
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