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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-03-25 09:55 AM


For Susan Caldwell

       Always,
she seeks further
for  silver linings
under dark clouds
        searching,
for slivers of light
bringing forth hope
to brighten the skies,

allowing the tears
that have reigned
to finally run dry.


She bursts forth
  in illuminating glow
    as she nurtures,
          and heals

          in her spirit we grow...

she does not know
the gift that she gives
but,
she shines.......
         positive.



{for ALL of your inspiration
my friend....thank you...}



I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-03-25 09:59 AM


Gentle,
I'm sure she'll love it. I did

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-03-25 10:01 AM



Yes, she does all of that,
and very well, indeed!

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-03-25 10:06 AM


Sey, I hope she does!  Thanks m'friend...


Kari?   
she's alot like another SUNNY person
I know....thanks much..
that she is/does!!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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4 posted 2005-03-25 10:08 AM




Thank you Donna.  

  thank you for making my day brighter.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-03-25 10:11 AM


yanno Susan, yer beautiful when your blushing....

and when your not.

LeeJ
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Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-03-25 10:14 AM


Magic, thus creating a windsong of chimes, as does the incredible glow from this amazing poet...you two should write a duet...

Amazing, both of you...!!!

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-03-25 10:25 AM


should the POSITIVE lady ever so choose to do..
the honor would truly be mine!

thanks Lee honey...your a doll.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-03-25 10:31 AM


How beautiful a dedication to our sweet Susan.
Yes, she is all this and more.
Hugs pretty lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2005-03-25 12:11 PM


I think Lee has a great idea there! You two would make an awesome poetic duo!

The thoughtfulness and sensitivity you have shown for another fine poetess, is just one of the many reasons that I like you, Donna!

Special hugs to you both,
Linda

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
10 posted 2005-03-25 12:24 PM


yea
shes a groovy gal
we'll keep her around a while i hope

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