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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-03-23 04:11 PM



You Echo My Chambers


you echo my chambers
in your satin darkness
somehow
I know I fit
in your hollow
arm to shoulder
washed there
by nightly nights
of loneliness’ erosion
a self imposed prison
in waiting
I too know of wait
and dreamed of tasting salt
from tongue licked skin
no dream of wakened vanish
I long to feel such touch
in the measure
of no distance
strength is only
justified by weakness
and need gives
way to want

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-23 04:17 PM


yes, it does

what a way to describe this

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-03-23 05:50 PM


OneSlick~
This is my favorite of the day !!!!
Oh my ... how lovely you share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2005-03-24 01:38 PM


You made me smile - not an easy thing to do some days.

Thank you!

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-24 01:41 PM


Helen, this has just become my favorite of yours.  Well done.
Hugs

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-03-24 07:19 PM


Man....!!!

Nobody does it better.

Eric

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
6 posted 2005-03-25 03:52 PM


"strength is only
justified by weakness"

way cool words there Helen!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

majnu
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7 posted 2005-03-29 02:33 PM


you are beautiful.

-majnu
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