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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-03-23 07:41 AM

I only can write
what lies inside
these feelings I can
    no longer deny.

It rocks and rolls me
to the edge
but that damn far
       I don't think I can bend.

Passions fire     still lingers
and I burn in your flame
and I still ask myself
       who the hell is to blame.

I've exposed          my 'me'
to the very core
but you keep taking
   and pushing for more.

I've taken each word
that you've lied
and tossed each one
out to the side,

I'm a tethered soul
  now torn apart
        unable to escape
           the thunder of heart.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-23-2005 08:48 AM).]

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-03-23 07:58 AM

Very good and intense write... enjoyed reading this...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-23 08:50 AM

It rocks and rolls me
to the edge
but that damn far
I don't think I can bend.

You'd be very surprised what the mind and soul can do, once they join and put they're gusto behind it....miraculous writing lady jane....enjoyed

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-03-23 09:23 AM

Yes! I feel this. Very much so.
Well done Donna. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2005-03-23 10:42 AM

Ah so powerfully felt....~P

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-03-23 11:52 AM

Thanks much all and hugs.

I realized there
were other loves I knew,
and then there was you.....Trace

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-03-23 12:55 PM

very powerful rambling

ramble on!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-03-23 01:00 PM

Thanks much Dixie, appreciate the support.

I might be going crazy
but going there is keepin me alive.
Living makes it clear
I'm just stuck right here
trying to survive.
Eddie/Troy

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-03-26 10:44 AM

good write

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-03-26 11:16 AM

Sounds like all take
no give...

on the other side.

Stand tall, bend willowy...
and spring back.

Those willow limbs
can sure sting
in their lash.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-03-28 09:28 AM

thank you ladies, for your smiles...
Hugs.

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