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as the leaf unfurls
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as the leaf unfurls |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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As the leaf unfurls itself when sunlight caresses its surface I too uncurl myself, from midnight’s dreams ~together~ we greet a new day sighing, in unison welcoming the chance to renew fresh morning’s dew for two then awaken veins of life anew. ~Moments to cherish~ first and last, knowing that as the leaf curls in upon itself, it is the grand finale. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The we in you is ultimately the grand finale And you deserve every morsal....hugs to ya for a tender loving write this morn |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Kacy, You brighten my morning with delight... I too uncurl myself, Just beautiful.....~P |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun A delightful read. Enjoyed |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Hi Kacy. Outlook Ex is down it will not connect. There for this is the only method by which I may communicate with Midnitesun. Hopefully the Mods will not mind if the Pips message system is being used for purposes other than those for which it was designed. Yesterday I went to school and attempted to take the placement test, but I could not hear well enough to be read a long passage that tests comprehention. So jean is going to Braille out this material so that I can read it. I am pondering a nude write, in which I will propose that there is no distinction between the empirical supposedly objectivist scientific views of the world, and ancient spiritual beliefs about the universe. Soon |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you Lee, Paul and Sy, for uncurling with me  Jaime, I will attempt an email to you this evening, hoping the system is working for you again. Write it, I look forward to reading! Good luck on the test, hope they can get you on target with it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"dew for two" .... I'm jealous!!! No, really, this was a joy to read.  ....jo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy....the title alone is a poem, and the rest is wonderful! Much enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jo and Martie, thanks for reading. I'm pleased you enjoyed this. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A leaf also uncurls in spring Delighting in its new birth. So are you. Beautiful story, Kacy. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You circled your own poem with a beginning and end, Kacy. An excellent read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you Groves, Ken, Karilea! I kinda like this one myself. It unfolded itself painlessly. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite welcoming, the fresh air scent of this write. Nice one. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Kacy Wonderful imagery throughout this fine piece. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this so much!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love the comparison! This is truly beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely - this SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like this side of you! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
WOW! Love this! It has such gentleness about it. miscellanea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am so happy that so many of you liked this one! THANKS for your replies guys! |
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