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Sleepless in S.A. (poem from titles)
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Sleepless in S.A. (poem from titles) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Oh, in this sweet spring of life loved and random acts of kindness it was the corners by the three rivers and shifting sands that every piece of my heart frantically romantic in the rain. The rose of Valentine Love in the fractured garden forsaken one dark and stormy night waiting for tomorrow’s smile but subject to change as Valentine’s Day approaches. Out to dry and high and dry at the pond of love orbs of light open doors for time sense, soft words and in truth, serenity, while illusions bath in the waves of an endless dream. I am your lady, or wish I could be, and not walking with a seer, my arm in his, on frosty nights losing all. My Valentine, don’t let me go. Hear the call and sit the fire of distant love on blade of grass under the tree of Eden and listen to my Valentine’s song about love and to love learning finally to be forever in love. A million stones to dawn’s joy then to leave without saying hello on this new eye day on the day of lovers like a Tennessee volunteer and I’m overwhelmed. Will you please be my Valentine forever and a day but not a mayored Valentine 2005 lost in the jungle before the storm clicking needles one in a carpe diem sunbonnet? The air that I breathe re-twisting my dream of Fernando in this wheel of life and prison sanctuary into some dead sea soup, my Valentine, because with you my spirit soars like the morning dove. My Valentine’s Day cry the food for dreams in September if a dark and hot night doesn’t pop the balloons like acts of piracy. A year ago, today baby bloomers over Wreckers and the Eddy stone so I wrote you for Valentines, lovingly yours, again, while venturing outside of routine. This beyond everything made thy heart beat softly but your silence had an impact. For Yasmine in waiting, for my husband, and Luka, woman of my heart, I spin the dream and that’s how I know I love you so, my perpetual Valentine. Bringing home the bloom in Valentine hues like a sunrise smile for Enchantress in this rainstorm trying hard to be a blizzard and oh, from the depth of sigh these hearts such a label maker! Mr. President! Have you ever ...? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Mr. President! Have you ever ...? somehow, i doubt that he has  seen such a talent for this tapestry of pipsters within the frame of your making |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
inkedgoddess - Who can really say these days - the President has eyes everywhere - or so they say! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the way you do these |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very clever! Enjoyed this very much! Corinne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's always a pleasure to see the way you weave a conglomeration of titles into a smoothly flowing poem. *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Cool! Yep, I said.... COOL! JL |
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