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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2005-03-17 07:35 AM


Water Gavotte

Sail down on sound of water smooth
Flow person candle, moonlit soothe
Bubbling with time and dawn
Bridge, sea blue blossoms
Politely swirling celebration
Love carriage, frosting breath's fusion
In evening…sap of river grass
Passage of wine, the hourglass
Banner pavilion in the wind
Liberty translations welcome
Summer pool of wind and rain
Consider floating like a dream
Fragrance railings skipping deep
Clear, crisp, clean...
Turning tempos, thinking hard
Idle roaming flowers bend
Murmuring past events transcend
To have their meaning
To have their blessing
Overgrown with life’s assembly
I shall visit more oft then not
Where south winds puff a water gavotte

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-17-2005 08:16 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-03-17 08:05 AM


LeeJ
Day dream or night wile you have your own style. Morning sweet

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-17 08:14 AM


Lee I am keeping this one of yours, beautiful..just beautiful!

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2005-03-17 05:56 PM


And you have walked through those gates of love, and it shows in all your writings.
Excellent write Lee J.

JL


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