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Open Poetry #34

Peaceful Perfection.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2004-11-12 04:58 AM

I have seen the joyful rising sun,
heard the rapturous rising cadence of the skylark,
and blessed each of those
precious moments for the Lords hearing.

Never have i heard the hot bark
of the dogs of war, unleashed
to desecrate the bodies made perfect
by the Lord's omnipotent hand.

These eyes have never witnessed
savagery perpurtrated by humans on humans.
Prime life cut down before their
creator, like a beautiful garden trampled.

At the end of our days these
attrocities against humans will be attoned.
Death is not for leaders to decide,
peace should be our central gene.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (11-13-2004 05:38 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-12 10:04 AM

yes, it should

good write here, very thought-provoking

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-12 10:18 AM

'Let there be peace on earth...
and let it begin with me.'

I agree Philip...very thought provoking write.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-11-12 10:24 AM

Peace and hope...

JL

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2004-11-14 09:31 PM

Phil

I applaud you for such a fabulous write. I couldn't agree more.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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