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0 posted 2004-11-11 09:48 AM


Though the air is still, a
gale blows within the warrior’s mind.
Ever vigilant, in wait of the unseen
foe whose only desire is death.

He walks and stalks the streets beyond
the sand hill, he slides through the
night of your dreams.  He whispers
tauntingly to you....he waits
till your shadow darkens his door.

You, ever courageous, ever strong
stand tall amongst the swaying
reeds of a river flowing life’s
blood endlessly toward a waiting
sea.

You, who dare not cast the first
stone, shirk not from the thrust
that silently comes.

You amaze me, as I sit comfortably
beside a fire...embers rising
softly into a still night...For as my
embers glow orange and hot, your
own awaits the sudden storm's
gust...and eyes squint into the
night...as death crawls silently
about, as death crawls....
silently about...and I cry for
~you~

© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-11 09:51 AM


well you just ripped my heart right out with this....what a special write this is Barry and bless you for writing it....

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-11-11 10:01 AM



God Bless all of them that serve today,
served yesterday, and will serve tomorrow.

And thank you, Sir...for this remarkable write.

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3 posted 2004-11-11 10:04 AM


This....is among your best. This poem should be required reading in every High School civics class.

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4 posted 2004-11-11 10:37 AM


Yes, we sit comfortably...thanks to them, so many of them...
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