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kayjay
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0 posted 2004-11-11 09:45 AM


"On the eleventh hour of the eleventh day…"

Unknowns lie “In Flanders Fields”
They gave for us their wartime shields.
The “war to end all wars” has passed,
But history has now recast;
The mold for war is not the past.
Today the guns kill Tigris yields.


© Copyright 2004 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-11 09:48 AM


kayjay
Good one, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2004-11-11 09:54 AM


That verse in the Bible should have read (i)"The wars you always have with you"(/i)....

But -- though the presence of war seems not to have changed, the reasons for it have become a whole lot more civilized. Imagine the Roman army going to Iraq to do what we're doing, and then to rebuild the place and leave....or the German army, for that matter.

We still have growing to do, but at least we're choosing better.

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3 posted 2004-11-11 09:57 AM


very well done Ken.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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4 posted 2004-11-11 10:07 AM


On days such as this,
finding myself quietly
holding long minutes...

Perhaps it is because they
gave lives so I hold today

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5 posted 2004-11-11 12:07 PM





Thank you for this Ken...Well done.

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7 posted 2004-11-11 02:42 PM


...and the wars wage on...

Peace, Love & Harmony,
Linda

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8 posted 2004-11-11 08:44 PM


Ken

I wish for peace.  

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