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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2004-11-10 04:56 PM



Remember the time
when I splintered my rhyme
sliced it all neat
just for you.

Carefully choosing
after endless perusing
of alphabet soup
the poop, I spit out
in a poem.

I'm no longer
the poetic gnome.

What pours from me now
the why, the how
though raw, elongated
sure, pontificated
it's mine...

and it always will be.

WhiteRose 11/07/04

© Copyright 2004 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2004-11-10 05:09 PM



What pours from me now
the why, the how
though raw, elongated
sure, pontificated
it's mine...

and it always will be.

No better way to shoot but straight out from the inside
good way of putting this intent, in your words

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-11-10 05:12 PM


WhiteRose
That was a load of buckshot. Enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-11-10 05:15 PM


You tell 'em, Harriet! lol

~ and Seymour's comment was a hoot!


EA


WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2004-11-10 07:54 PM


inkedgoddess..you get to the point where you just don't care anymore what anyone thinks. It's called getting old. Darn it.

sy..I usually send out a warning, but no one was in the line of fire. Thanks for reading dear friend.

Earthy Angel..I've been telling em, and telling em, and telling em. Now I'm just shooting from the hip. Thanks for reading sweetie.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-11-12 03:45 AM


yeah, getting old is just what it is...I feel it

good write, m'friend

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