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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-10 07:52 AM


I remember your back
when you sat on the bench
and worked your magic
on the 28 toys

was it the tattoo in my mind
or the smell of leather
how you made me stop
and pull up a chair

you told me about your candy
but said it was over there
on the other side of you
different isle and hidden

it was later on some lifetime
when I returned again
you were still toying
wishing for the latest models

you asked if my demon found
heaven or even anything else
that wasn't breakable
and would I take something used

that was tested and had a guarentee
________________

Dark


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-10 08:04 AM


well now D, I do believe I have just found another favorite to add to my collection of stuff you write that I just love...
You've outdone yourself with this one my friend, and you should see my smile right now.  Love this.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-10 08:27 AM


well, good morning sir



I love the way you articulate...

smiles and hugs

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-11-10 09:18 AM


just a tad of one toke over the line
you are a spark on a dull november morning

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-11-10 10:24 AM


Interesting read, this  - love the last stanza - I think used is often better than new -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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