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My marriage
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My marriage |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I said my vows I promised to be true We loved so much It was the right thing to do I knew something wasn't going right and before I knew it Came our first fight. I just assumed and accused And in all that To tell the truth.....you refused Ponderding back and forth I just can't take this I am here pregnant Pack all of my stuff and I am headed for the door. I knew you were lying I knew you were cheating It was only a matter of time before I stopped believing. Where are those vows You and I promised Wasn't there something in there about you being honest? This marriage is a hoax I should of known After my first choke. You promised to be true If I gave you one more chance You give me chills as if by body was covered in ants. I am not sure what to expect But one thing I do know We need to start with the word...respect. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
But respect beings way before couples walk down the aisle....good luck into working things out |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, so true, but one cannot give what one doesn't own? Written exceptionally well.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I thought I had signed this yesterday.. glad I came back for another read.. Yes, there must be respect in a relationship. Heart Hugs, Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May you find the peace, happiness ~ and respect ~ that you deserve. Love, Light, and Harmony, Earth Angel |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Hey all Thank you so much for the bit of encouragement. My friend and I are going through a rough part right now, so therefore I just kind of put both together.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
just hang in there let some freind be a helper in time it all heals D |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
seems that i see a lot of this stuff going on lately |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Definitley from the heart. I have also been on the opposite end and know where you are coming from. Stand tall and have courage, believe it or not, there is hope. Steve. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Where are those vows You and I promised Wasn't there something in there about you being honest?" That is where it all starts. If you don't have honesty there is nothing, it's a facade'.  follow your gut."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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