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Fall of the Summer
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Fall of the Summer |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Fall of the Summer It is beauty that dies the cruelest When the warmth of the golden sun sleeps Causing autumn leaves to smile upward While aging gracefully and quickly within the shadows Splashing the skies with orange and yellow stars Before descending to the ground--dry and brittle Trampled by stargazers and the innocent, A cruel but splendid celebration of the summer’s end. Marcel |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
I can see this all exactly as you have written....right outside my window. enjoyed. ~myheart~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have given me a whole new perspective on the fall of summer. Beautifully descriptive. I liked the play on words of "fall of summer"! Autumnal hugs, EA  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I liked this very much -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh yes...The thought of this does paint well upon your pallet, and yet... Autumn is eternal. Nice write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful images of Autumn...much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh marcel, you are growing and growing! |
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