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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-11-08 10:52 AM


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Life is but a spirit’s dream,
Of mortal stitch in fractured seam.
Where lessons learned can light the trail,
Of sacred quests to Holy Grail.

Beyond the realm of mankind’s know,
Wisdom’s gained through stitch and sew.
Your thoughts are forms soon realized,
~ Be they as pure as babe baptized.

Look within your inner space,
Which holds the visage of God’s face.
For there the Fount of Force does dwell,
~ The Host of Heaven ~ not seed of Hell.

Life is but a spirit's dream,
Of mortal stitch in fractured seam.
Where lessons learned can light the trail,
Of sacred quests to Holy Grail.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+



© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2004-11-08 10:57 AM



Life is but a spirit's dream,
Of mortal stitch in fractured seam.
Where lessons learned can light the trail,
Of sacred quests to Holy Grail.
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Lot's of wisdom and purity of heart in this and to begin and end in the above verse wraps it between ribbons sweet.  A very enjoyable and welcome read.

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-11-08 12:08 PM


Most beautifully expressed

Hope

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-08 01:16 PM



Linda, your amazing
is showing again!

myheart
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4 posted 2004-11-08 01:25 PM


beautiful.     ~myheart~
NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2004-11-08 03:31 PM


Well Linda, you've gone and outdone yourself (AGAIN) with this beautiful bit of writing.

I have read it several times and enjoyed it more with each read.

You are Blessed.....hugs and smiles,
Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-11-08 03:37 PM


Fantastic Linda!!!
You have outdone yourself this time dear lady!
Hugs~Nancy

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Corinne
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7 posted 2004-11-08 04:24 PM


Nicely done, Earth Angel!


Corinne

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-11-08 04:50 PM


reading it thrice, getting better each time,its message of pure heart
Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2004-11-08 04:55 PM


ah.. nicely said ma'am... and nicely done..

I enjoyed

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-11-08 06:20 PM


Mark ~

Thank you for the pleasant commentary!


Linda

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2004-11-08 06:20 PM


Hope ~

I appreciate your appreciation!


Linda

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12 posted 2004-11-08 06:21 PM


Sunshine ~

Awww shucks! You're too kind! ~ and I like that!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2004-11-08 06:22 PM


myheart



EA

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14 posted 2004-11-08 06:23 PM


Martie ~

Dems lovin' werds!

Warm hug for a warm reply!
Big Hug
Linda

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15 posted 2004-11-08 06:24 PM


Nancy ~

Now that is an "F" word that I don't mind seeing! lol

Hugs with love,
Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2004-11-08 06:24 PM


Corinne ~

Hi there, C! Thank you!


Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-11-08 06:26 PM


Goddess ~

Thrice?!? Wow! I'm pleased that you found it worth the read! ~ 3x's over! lol

Love & Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-11-08 06:26 PM


Captain ~

A "nice" from nice you, is indeed nice!

Sending you a nice hug and a nice smile,
EA

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