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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-11-07 11:51 PM



In a land of disaccord
on a continent of habit
family intrigue
amid superficial sorts
I seek harmony
in ways people react towards me
to show that they're error free
who wouldn't...
can't help see how I might set an example
there in the initiatives that I make
faced with constant guarded reception
whether blood related or not
as the phone is passed on to the next
my calls accompanied by nervous laughter
are passed on to another unwilling soul
and one gets a tell-tell sign
that somebody on the other end
is less receptive than I would like
embarrassed perhaps by amicable exchange
small talk is no easy routine
you see I demand a little attention
it helps to feed back to the psyche
positively
that there is some relationship
out there with all the loose ends
in the world of habit
in the world of forced conversation
in a land of disaccord.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-08-2004 08:00 PM).]

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2004-11-08 05:05 AM


Bravo!
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2 posted 2004-11-08 05:09 AM


good write again...love the new pic
ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2004-11-08 08:07 PM


On my way to better relations, thanks for reading
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