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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-06 05:46 PM




Hi.

My name?
It’s...
of no consequence.

Here’s
a picture
of my girl.

You,
or something like you,
met her
one night
when she was thirteen....

You don’t
remember....

I do...

Be afraid

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2004-11-06 08:18 PM


intriguingly disturbing storyline. compels the reader to ponder
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-11-06 08:48 PM


John~
Interestingly mysterious~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-06 09:10 PM


very cool write

that last line said it all

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-15 12:44 PM


read and confused. There are at least 10 stories in those words just by cut in different ways.

what a poet!!!!! trapped in midnight..it is me.

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