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A Poem to Remember
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A Poem to Remember |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Poem to Remember A poem to remember Is a poem about the heart It has a common ending And a very common start A kiss a touch a field of green A knight a maid an intimate scene A snow white dove, a velvet glove A whisper of the sound of love Illusion plays a violin The eyes see soar and nothing more Nimble is the mandolin Plucking strings of evermore The mind is wined and dinned to mate It is the common start of fate And time is stopped a candles glow And change impaired the view of sew It is a thing beyond my ken And only happens now and then |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There you go, plucking remembers and sounding heartstrings... Yes, Sir, a Poem to Remember... and tucked into my library, I always shall!  Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Illusion plays a violin The eyes see soar and nothing more Nimble is the mandolin Plucking strings of evermore' Pluck on dearest poet ... pluck on~ I shall remember the poem and the man behind the ink that *gifts* us every morning with his poetic think~  THANK YOU~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A poem to remember Is a poem about the heart It has a common ending And a very common start A kiss a touch a field of green A knight a maid an intimate scene A snow white dove, a velvet glove A whisper of the sound of love" Indeed a poem so beautiful containing these bounties is truly one to remember... ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
this is very beautiful and brings a smile to my face. thankyou. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good morning Sy...a morning to remember yes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You pluck strings that ring ever true in our minds...Thank You Sir... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"A kiss a touch a field of green A knight a maid an intimate scene A snow white dove, a velvet glove A whisper of the sound of love" ~ Your words wine and dine my mind!  May your candle glow forever more! More! More! More!... EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - Sy - yes, the heartfelt gift of words is the most memorable - enjoyed this -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The mind is wined and dinned to mate It is the common start of fate And time is stopped a candles glow And change impaired the view of sew ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Myohmy....do I love that verse...those couplets are poetic gold...they are the heart and soul of the poem. Whenever I read you I look for that one line, that one couplet, or verse that holds the true spirit of the inspire...and for me those lines are magic. It is a thing beyond my ken And only happens now and then ============================== oh my darling Sy...I must disagree... tis not beyond you at all..and its our good fortune that it happends each morn when we read your render and then remember.  *ww*   Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine It is so nice and warm in your library. Hugs Marge, You are a love. Nancy, Thank you sweet, hugs myheart A smile is worth its weight in gold. passing, You are a doll. Barry, Thank you my friend. Earth Angel I'll try my angel. Susan Thank you dear. JM, My mind must eat and feed each day And you are my desert. Winkiewinkie |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 It seemed you wrote this poem for me An avid member of your symphony It's hard for my day to even start Without your words playing in my heart. Morning Sy  Maaaaauuuuhhhh! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a love and if I was morman you would be on my courting list. LOL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I love this! It's going to my library too!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alli4000, I thank you for the honor of your library. |
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