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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2004-11-05 07:11 PM



tiny flecks of
frosting

lingering on your
lips

until
I lick them
gently
eagerly

tasting the sweetness
of your mouth
hungry for
more

the cake can wait



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eor
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1 posted 2004-11-05 07:12 PM


hmm, so you can have your cake and eat it too...well at  least the best part!

enjoyed

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

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2 posted 2004-11-05 07:45 PM


very cool write
jwesley
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3 posted 2004-11-05 08:12 PM


loved this and laughed with it....great write.

jwesley

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-05 08:22 PM


Heh heh...good one Sharon!!!
Hugs~

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5 posted 2004-11-05 09:47 PM


ahhhh...delectable
~smiling~ thoughts
M

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6 posted 2004-11-05 10:29 PM


oh yes - they say the frostings the best part

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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7 posted 2004-11-06 07:26 AM


This was headed for MC, but I decided to make it just playful..thanks for reading it!
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8 posted 2004-11-06 01:35 PM


Head it on over, we can take it   Playful it was too!
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9 posted 2004-11-06 03:48 PM


I should say so!! How very romantic!

Deb

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10 posted 2004-11-06 06:14 PM


Smile...

You can always do an MC version.

And I like my cake with ice cream please.


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11 posted 2004-11-06 06:39 PM


LOL, a yummy write. And LOL at Karen's reply. Licking imagery. HMMMM. Wonder what you could do with that?  
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12 posted 2004-11-06 06:49 PM


Enjoyed this M's deVine, and yes an MC version would be appetising

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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13 posted 2004-11-09 08:20 AM


What a delight this is! *S* Of course... it makes me think of kisses that are sweet without the frosting... LOL... Yes... this is definitely one to heat up the kitchen! *S*
JL
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14 posted 2004-11-09 08:25 AM


NICE!

JL

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15 posted 2004-11-09 08:38 AM


LOL, enjoyed...
grinning here

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