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kayjay
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0 posted 2004-11-05 06:06 PM

When Love Has Gone

If your love has gone, you must travel on, because some things just don’t last.
Do you hear a tale of love gone stale? It’s for sure that die was cast.
If you cannot stick with love gone sick, then it’s time to find your life.
For no good can come from being dumb in a house that’s filled with strife.

When your love is bad and it seems so sad, it is time to face the fact.
Do you feel a strain of your love in vain, and it seems like you’ve been hacked?
If these thoughts ring true and your life you rue, you must purge your heart so sere.
For a closed up door offers this and more, there’s a portal open near.

When you do not grasp how your love’s great clasp became loosened, do be strong.
Do you know, my friend, that the pain can end when the time passed has been long?
If there be a cure for that love so pure, you must know it’s within your touch.
For the real test is the one known best; you are worth so very much.

[This message has been edited by kayjay (11-07-2004 10:50 AM).]

Margherita
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Eternity

1 posted 2004-11-05 06:55 PM

You are right!
This is beautifully done and holds great wisdom.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-05 06:57 PM

So much truth here Ken.
So expertly written.
~Hugs to you m'friend~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Martie

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3 posted 2004-11-05 07:36 PM

Ken

Wise words that many should read and heed.

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2004-11-05 07:42 PM

I felt like this is for me

I'm claiming it

for my library

kayjay
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5 posted 2004-11-06 01:24 AM

Thanks to all who stopped to read. Dixie, you write so well of love lost, you are certainly welcome to this. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2004-11-06 10:47 AM

DANG! Did you know that I was 'reading' Dixie in this? lo and behold, here she is, claiming this wise write for herself?

Well done, Ken, well done.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-11-06 10:57 AM

For one, for all...
this poem is felt with heart...
and written with great sensitivity...

thank you, Ken!

James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2004-11-06 01:31 PM

If... there's the key word, my friend...if.

~~J

*Alli4000*

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9 posted 2004-11-07 12:10 PM

Yes, like they have said, there are such wisdom in these words...

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

zenny
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10 posted 2004-11-07 04:41 PM

Thanks for saying what i needed to be remembered of

Nice write

myheart
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since 2004-11-05

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lost in your eyes

11 posted 2004-11-07 05:44 PM

very much enjoyed your poem kayjay.
~myheart~

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