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Open Poetry #34

Precious Stitches

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2004-10-20 08:19 PM

Precious Stitches

She comes searching with eyes aglow
filled with curiosity.
Touching each line like a delicate flower that is
opening to the dawn of a first kiss.
As she touches each expression she finds
precious stitches
of
gold and silver in every word.
These cherished words weaving an intricate tapestry of mystery and succulent pleasures.
She touches with perception each morsel the writer
does share.
Each line bringing life into view of packages
wrapped in brightly colored hues.
Maybe one line giving her the answer she
has been looking for all her life.
Another leading her down a path of tears and sorrow,
for the writer has touched her deep within her
searching soul.
Taste these visions with each touch, my friend.
Enjoy the world of poetry.

Love BonBon

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-20 08:54 PM

Bonnie...these ARE precious stitches! Where have you been!? I hope things are good with you...

this is a

of a poem!

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

2 posted 2004-10-21 01:18 AM

As she touches each expression she finds
precious stitches
of
gold and silver in every word

i love the way you put it together...indeed poems can do a lot, this one's precious

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-10-21 04:10 AM

so very true
finding answeres on these
pages of blue
along with inspiration
and a feeling of joy

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-10-21 01:42 PM

I do love your writing Bonney

It is something special

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-10-21 02:42 PM

As she touches each expression she finds
precious stitches
of
gold and silver in every word.
so very true

hugs
M

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2004-10-22 03:42 PM

Thank you everyone for reading have not been writing as much lately. I have a few started but not finished. So glad you enjoyed these words.
Hugs BonBon

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