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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2004-11-04 10:13 AM

You told me one night
in the hush of darkness
and shroud of deceit
that you didn’t know what love is.

The shadows hid my tears

You told me, as I held myself
that you weren’t happy
but hoping the next day would be better
than the last.

The wind carried away the sound of my pain

You smiled my way feeling relief of honesty,
not conscience of my wounds.
Yet you still withheld
and I still hoped.

The innocence of my heart shattered
in the whispered words of another night.

So now that I am stronger
you say you love me,
you need me and can’t bare to lose me.

But the breeze carried the empty of your words away
and barely brushed my face.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-11-04 10:15 AM

Susan
Perhaps the other cheek, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-11-04 10:21 AM

nicely written ma'am..

sometimes it is hard to understand why too late the words come we wanted to hear before..

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-11-04 10:29 AM

yes....omg Susan!! ....this one hits home with me right now in ways I can not even describe to you....
I am feeling this one with you m'friend...
very well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-11-04 10:36 AM

this one touches~~~

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-11-04 11:04 AM

just goes to prove how words or unspoken words in ommission can change views....

Good one

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-11-04 07:59 PM

if you can figure out the heart, please let me know

and

all at once

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-11-04 08:13 PM

"But the breeze carried the empty of your words away
and barely brushed my face."

Excellent Susan!! Much enjoyed this keeper.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2004-11-04 09:13 PM

Hugs

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