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0 posted 2004-11-03 11:27 PM


Planned Neglect (destroying bonds forged in time)

Torn Silence
within a sphere
of uncomfort
caused by a night
of reckless inhabition
and subconsious longings
playing out among friends.
moon strands
shine through bare
tree limbs
as warring eyes
meet from across
a field
of strangled wildlife.
the battle lines are drawn
within a senseless war
of frigid shoulders
and silence.
Who will be victorious?
a sinister mind
in accordance
with planned neglect
hastens the fall of friendship
in a flourishing relationship
How is it that
lack of communication
can destroy a bond
of friendship
forged by time?


(another poem inspired by my living muse (thankyou Anna. I hope you all enjoy)

nice use of muffin

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