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Open Poetry #34

Sara

Lance McLove
New Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 8

0 posted 2004-10-20 05:13 PM

Sara reminds me of this girl I used to know,
when I was a kid and I'd go to see the fireworks.
She would grab my arm when they exploded.
It made me feel like quite a man.
But that was a very long time ago.
Now here's Sara taking me back.

Sara I love you or maybe that other girl.
I don't know but I hope it's you.
She's not here, but here you are.
I think you'll do.

Her hair was blonde and you have black hair.
Her eyes were blue and yours are brown.
But I'm not going to let appearances decide for me,
Since neither one of you is a red head with green eyes.
Now what the hell was that girl's name?
I don't know, but I know yours.

So, Sara I love you or maybe that other girl.
I don't know but I hope it's you.
She's not here, but here you are.
I think you'll do.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-10-20 07:18 PM

Nice...James

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2004-10-20 09:14 PM

so which girl was it?...we are always reminded of the ones we met earlier. Good write.

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