Something nice - on the hoof

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Open Poetry #34

Something nice - on the hoof

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-11-01 03:35 PM

On a sandwich lunch bit of grass to rest an old suit that stained well
She danced swirling a skirt flashing colour and light that sparkled a heart of two
Anointed in desire sparkling in her fire she fashioned a moment or you
In her eyes that swept like a close cropped cutter's edge she trim an ego from you
To take salad, cold and dripping melting to a mountain for a moment or two

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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1 posted 2004-11-01 04:35 PM

Wow...!!!!

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-11-01 09:09 PM

neat

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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3 posted 2004-11-02 03:24 PM

Thanks Passing

I will try and go easy on that horseradish spread.

Dave

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