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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-10-20 03:36 PM



I loved you through and through
why I fell for you? No could of
knew. I meant to be your freind,
your soul companion in the depts
of our connection within this
battle of our health.

You shined away,told me
we were special but ignored
me anyway,I cry at nite the
tears soak through my pillow

My eyes are always red the pain
is seeping out of my body, but
your thought still remains,for
my heart does not want to listen
does not want to believe.

All the things you said could not
be a lie, if that is so why should
I cry,still my heart saids don't let
go as painful as it is.. I'm in love
with someone that will never know.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2004-10-20 03:42 PM


Haven't we all been there...I know I have....very sad!

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-10-20 03:43 PM


A long time ago this was the reverse with a guy moving from friendship to love.

He made the approach and it was the end of the friendship.

I often wondered whether he was a friend or a stooge.

Perhaps like doors we should have tags showing open or closed at appropriate parts.

Your words are really good

dave

Foxyoasis
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3 posted 2004-10-20 06:32 PM


thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-10-20 07:26 PM


Fabulous writing...James
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5 posted 2004-10-21 07:15 AM


enjoyed


LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-10-21 07:50 AM


sad but true sometimes
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