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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2005-02-04 02:45 PM




The Voice
You will need to give them guidance.
You are the only one who can.
You will need to bear the weight, without complaint,
of many others who are mired
in complacency or apathy or fear,
who think everything is fine,
who think there is no work to be done,
that there are no more dreams to make come true.
   You do not submit to circumstances;
you create new circumstances
that were never there before,
customizing them to suit your purposes.
As you do this,
you  begin to orchestrate
the world of your desire,
and the visions of your inner world
will come to you in outer life.
If the tasks seem daunting,
never doubt, not for one minute,
that you're not doing this alone,
that I am always there with you,
whether you are tramping through the high road
or slogging through the mud;
that I will never be more than a heart-beat away,
that it will be at night that I will come to you
in fantasies and dreams.
For you have pledged your life to me.
What else can I do for you
than pledge to you my own?

SC


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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-04 05:38 PM


I like your words.

Dave

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-02-04 06:05 PM


wonderful writing

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3 posted 2005-02-04 07:02 PM


Enjoyed this very much!

~Alli~

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passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-02-04 10:01 PM


this is good
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5 posted 2005-02-04 11:57 PM


smiling at this amazing write
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6 posted 2005-02-05 11:08 AM


Jaime, this has to be one of my favorite of your poems ~ and that is saying a mouthful!
I loved it ~ and I am saving it!

There is much wisdom in that voice! Yes, we can manifest our thoughts into reality so it most assuredly is best to think in positives!

Big, warm hug to you, my friend!
Your "angel" nurse,
Linda

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