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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-10-29 09:34 PM



She is Color

All I needed to know, I found in her,
from the sparkle in her smile,

she was highlighted radiance
crystal sharp bright

it reflected in beautiful eyes
glowed upon fresh apple cheeks

sprang from the lilt of her hands
surrounding joy in circles of natural…

She would say she was a simple
flower girl, for she walked



among them, easily, assuredly,
their scent, her scent,
their touch, her touch,

that lifted light to heavens.

I can imagine easily those whom
she melts in greeting and gifting,
as all months follow the footstep of her,
all reasons to give a gift,

and all I can give back
is my heart.

We love you, Flower Girl.



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-10-29 10:22 PM


don't no who the flower girl was but its a nice dedication


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2 posted 2004-10-29 10:33 PM


I saw fair haired dreams among the wildflowers.  You really have a very special skill Kar.
TD

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3 posted 2004-10-29 11:29 PM


Karilea

You just knew that I needed this at this time, didn't you?  That's because you are so very special.  

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4 posted 2004-10-30 12:33 PM


yes, we love you Martie... and this is an absolutely beautiful gift Karilea.

Mxx

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

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5 posted 2004-10-30 01:01 AM


she is all of this and then......lovely lovely....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

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6 posted 2004-10-30 02:09 AM


beautiful
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7 posted 2004-10-30 09:42 AM


Whenever the heart speaks, a sweet scent of flowers is released into the air surrounding us. And there are such special "flower girls" who brighten our days with their whole being....... and by being "natural". That's the secret. And then "She is Color".

A very beautiful gift here, dear Karilea.

Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2004-10-31 07:57 AM


gorgeous


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9 posted 2004-10-31 09:00 AM


(Sigh!) This is exquisite Sunshine.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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10 posted 2004-10-31 04:58 PM


beautiful
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11 posted 2004-10-31 09:29 PM


Oh Sunshine, this is so beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem.
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