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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-02-12 02:14 PM



It Just Sounds Like Rain


one night we found ourselves along the edge
where I showed you secrets of places and things
little did I know you were practicing for another
heavily I wear a quiet river of those actions
and breathe the flowing grey heat of thunder
riding the red carpeted insiders guide to
distance on skies that are clearly not straight
paper protects me exposure from this silver storm
and in the quiet background there is no beat
but my pen gracefully leaks raindrops falling down
for in that once superficial touch scars pour deep

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-02-12 03:51 PM


keep pouring emotions...I'll keep hugging
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2005-02-12 04:00 PM


I prescribe a weekend of serenity--perhaps a little R&B, mimosas, and cheese & mushroom omelets.

I like this style on you, but save some "duckies", ladyslick, there's some other styles at a couple of boutiques I want you to see too. (The Funky Monkey & A-Ha on Magazine St.)




nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-02-12 05:07 PM


little did I know you were practicing for another


definitely stings...

M

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-02-12 05:11 PM


WOW!....

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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