navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Pour Niki Dans l'Honneur De Anne Desclos
Open Poetry #34
Post A Reply Post New Topic Pour Niki Dans l'Honneur De Anne Desclos Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2005-02-12 01:06 PM



Late in life,
refined
by the catalyst of your soul,
I have found
in my own way,
in my own trials
on my own trails,
in cities’ lights
and back streets’ despair,
even in the barren wastelands
where high desert winds
yield no memory of footsteps
abandoned in the dust before me,
freedom in the life of intent,
in devotion
beyond the simplicity of need,
in accepting
the gift of complete surrender
I have learned I am other,
and other does not always approve
of me;
yet time itself is of less consequence
than choice,
and choice given freely,
an absolute with total possession
total abandon,
complete acceptance of your gift,
the gift of self,
and of love itself
beyond measure or degree,
cannot fail to set us free.

©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-02-12 01:14 PM


I like the way this ends
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2005-02-12 01:34 PM


this is a type of love
that is wonderful
one that has never touched me
one without ...an if


*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
3 posted 2005-02-12 03:30 PM


Nice write!!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000*    Journal!

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2005-02-12 04:01 PM


icebox

"the gift of self,
and of love itself
beyond measure or degree,
cannot fail to set us free."

I believe this is true.  


Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2005-02-12 04:06 PM


icebox
An ice box without the ice.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2005-02-12 04:22 PM


Wonderful gift for Niki and thanks for sharing this deep understanding here.       ........jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (02-12-2005 07:35 PM).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-02-12 06:36 PM


he gift of self,
and of love itself
beyond measure or degree,
cannot fail to set us free.


I beleive you've hit the nail right on the head  Mr Ice.

smiling ....

M

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Pour Niki Dans l'Honneur De Anne Desclos

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary