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I Lost My Way
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I Lost My Way |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Lost My Way It was a super sunny day I lost my way Within the folds of scenery The greenery Looking for illusions love A dove In settling mist turning dew Searching for you Looking for a certain seem A dream I see in each horizons day Each night of stay And still within each launch and lurch I search With longings of my heart and mind To find To bring a dove my golden fleece To bring me love and my surcease |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds like a morning dove you were searching for dear Sy! Enjoyed this morning's read...and appreciate the form. Time for a cup of Chai tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~  In the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! This lovely poem winged its way gracefully over these seas of blue ~ and in fine form I might add!   EA  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely beautiful... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some things are worth holding in our heart and continuing the search... no matter how long it takes or how lost we feel. *S* Beautiful work!!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I suppose life wouldn't be quite as interesting if we didn't continually search! Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry again. I wish I could read and respond to yours and others daily! Have a good weekend, Sy! miscellanea |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Sy, This is terrific and effective writing. what an unusual rhythm....~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! totally different than what I expected by the title! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ummmmmm....so nice. I like the rhymic change in this....like a waltz. ......jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
Sey... What a lovely piece. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, you found the way into our hearts! I had to look up "surcease" ... well you associate it with love and LOVE will survive everything and everyone. You are loved NOW. This write is very melodious too. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweet. Earth Angel You are a dear, LeeJ And so are you. suthern Beautiful reply, miscellanea You are right, choshi A sweet reply, thank you. passing, Thank you love. iliana, A charming reply, thank you. Sunshine Love you too. Opoetry4me Thank you so much. Margherita, And you are loved too. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alli, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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