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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-10-28 05:28 PM


Lady earlier talked about something

Brought me back, but I still stay with the gap in the front tooth

It is easier on sandwiches

Piece of my nonsense

Dave

People talk of visions
But maybe something we see
Makes them sparks
Fly behind the eyes
We write of love and eyes
Of love lost
All we lost
While trying to find
A you
We never knew

Maybe we need someone
To keep
Or sacrifice
We are human
Not Gods
We live as we can
We dine
At a table
And the words
Match the table
Plastic spoons, knives
One by one

Until we can afford more

Dedicated to anyone starting out

Dave



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1 posted 2004-10-28 05:38 PM


"We live as we can
We dine
At a table
And the words
Match the table
Plastic spoons, knives
One by one

Until we can afford more"

This brought a soft smile to my face Dave.
Made me think of all those starting out,
and do they really care if they are using plastic cutlery?
Good stuff!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-10-28 06:15 PM


The idea is stop them eating it

Thanks for your beauty in your words

Dave

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3 posted 2004-11-05 08:59 AM


*smiling here*
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4 posted 2004-11-05 09:01 AM


sending a great big hug and grin

Exceptional thoughts

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5 posted 2004-11-05 06:23 PM


enjoyed!

~Alli~

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