'Tis not Some Verve of Want

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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-02-02 11:01 PM

Tis not Some Verve of Want

Sensual indulgence is not enough,
for it culminates slowly to this,
my culpable grief.

Appetite that would soften quick,
doth not know calenture,
nor could it appreciate its’ myriad nuances.
For inasmuch as passion be abstruse liquid,
regardless ‘tis not some verve of want,
a conclusive thrust toward beatitude.

Less innocent of twilight be love,
yet slower to wed to the heart.

She is a slivered kiss beneath a Prussian moon;
Vienna waltzed within the heart,
the courtly orchestration of grammar,
aimed to arouse from stammer to cadency,
both body and mind.

When love be readily a volition to be or not,
she is just a Jezebel,
an abstract feigning,
which upsurges when inclination would don raven hosiery.

I love thee more than that. Can I have this dance?

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-02 11:10 PM

gawd, this is dreamy! sigh.
very well done sir.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-02 11:26 PM

She is a slivered kiss beneath a Prussian moon;
Vienna waltzed within the heart,
the courtly orchestration of grammar,
aimed to arouse from stammer to cadency,
both body and mind.

you play a melody that captures in sweet rapture - mmmm - absolutely love this part -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-02-03 12:18 PM

Well done :bravo:....she is lucky to dance through life with you, dancing to and fro, with words of poetry.
The dance of love, of life, what a dance it is!
~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2005-02-03 08:38 AM

yes

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-02-03 08:45 AM

there is no comment I could think of which would glorify the essense of this poem...except...sensual and delicate...spiritual...

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2005-02-03 03:33 PM

Hey Sweetie,
I love this piece. Makes me feel warm all over.
I'm certain Michelle will love this one
as well.

Hugs to you

;-)

Amour Vous Always,

Within this heart you'll find love

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2005-02-03 08:19 PM

the entire feel to this piece is soft and dreamlike...

i love the image of
Prussian moon

tenderly strokes the heart.

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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