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To Hear the Call
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To Hear the Call |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To Hear The Call Singular seasons come, all the cycles remain hearken to south winds, to hear the long refrain streaming through like silver in some golden light then as if t'were sliver'd, shivers on into the night Blanketing frost of white, coverlet of earth passion laying low below, knowing of its worth receives all what is, yet fights all to live accepts when to take, and then when to give Snow goose on wing, breaking through the breeze still in search of summer, winter offers no release eye on figure of life's mate, up there in skies blue faithful through all cycles, a mating of the true To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release 02.10.01 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! where do you find that inspiration? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release beautiful, beautiful.....and yep, my inspiration must be over at your house, cause you got lots  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release Beautiful.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are one stimulating writer, this was so beautiful and true, gave me the chills...yup, your words are music or should be...smiles and hugs...thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....This is so very beautiful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Amen to that. JL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, just beautiful Kari. Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"receives all what is, yet fights all to live accepts when to take, and then when to give" Much beauty in all your words, sweet SIL! Hope all's well.  ...jo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
All one has to do is look at nature with a keen eye, as you have done here, Sunshine... And you will see all of humanities fears and joys, riding on a snow goose wing and in its dark eye.. You knew I would love this poem, didn't you.. As I most certainly do.. ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
An amazing display of talent and emotion. Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Brilliant Sunshine. Dave |
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