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Open Poetry #34

In The Joy Of Passing

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-01-29 07:52 PM

burning memories

smoke drifts in expectation

ashes in the wind

©2005 by icebox

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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1 posted 2005-01-29 08:01 PM

I try to keep the "joy" part in mind, but selfish me, I weep for myself.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2005-01-29 08:11 PM

very cool, yes this is

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2005-01-29 08:40 PM

icebox

Yes, I saw some of the joy in the memorial service for my mother in love. So I'd like to thank you for this.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2005-01-29 09:27 PM

And the cycle is complete and then again
comes again...in the passing. Somber thoughts,
but so very true.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-01-30 10:55 AM

This is excellent....builds that feeling of angst smoothly. Ease of movement is a difficult thing in any short poem.

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*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-30 12:40 PM

Nice write!

~Alli~

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