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0 posted 2005-01-28 03:05 PM



The sky decides, blue.

Clouds choose not to rain, and I

let tears decide…no.

© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-28 03:10 PM




You know what I think.

And thank you, sir.



Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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2 posted 2005-01-28 03:24 PM


My pleasure!

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3 posted 2005-01-28 04:05 PM


The pleasure is ours, my friend. *S*

This is lovely... and uplifting. *S*

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4 posted 2005-01-29 02:36 AM


well said!
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5 posted 2005-01-29 05:30 AM


RatL.,I knew this would be good, but your few words went off the chart of "great"!
It's nice to read your work again.

               Sadie

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6 posted 2005-01-29 09:40 AM


witty
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7 posted 2005-01-29 10:13 AM


Very nice....

~Alli~

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8 posted 2005-01-29 11:15 AM


Ed

Tears decide....gosh, I like that!  

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9 posted 2005-01-30 03:46 PM


Nicely crafted...

INclan

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10 posted 2005-12-12 04:58 PM


How to stop them when they're determined? *S*

Revisiting a beauty... *S*

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