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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-01-28 12:07 PM



Where can one go on ice glazed nights
except bar hop on temperate rites
thaw chilled through bones
as the winter looks peaceful
as entrails shudder with frost
hold those words
for warmer times.


What of warmer contacts
removed from colder nerves
they sought passionate encounters
preserved in ice packed freezers
cracked with efforts to chill out
the winter appears whiter
the sea steams
a heart aches
warmer times.


© Copyright 2005 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-01-28 01:14 AM


A heart does ache!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-28 07:57 AM


come on over to my cousin's bar in Kutztown, PA...it's a blast!!!

Tremendous write

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2005-01-31 09:22 PM


I like this.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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4 posted 2005-02-01 12:09 PM


Thanks all for reading

Lee, I might be in Philadelphia sooner than I think, where is Kutztown in reference to that?


ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2005-02-01 09:25 PM


Martin...
This was one of my most favorite of your writes so far.
TD

ecrivan
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6 posted 2005-02-01 10:41 PM


Well a belated Happy New Year...I think it just officially signals a step away from the constant rhyming couples that's been so much of my work so far....


passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-02-02 12:53 PM


well done Martin

enjoyed this

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