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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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"What if He was blind?" I asked, knowing disability. "What could He do then?" And now, counting down respectfully... This is all there is to this. Letters drip off of my tongue, sticky, and it's wrong to beg. So I plead and ask and pray, "Let it not be like it is..." Spoiled sore from age in youth, it wasn't s'posed to be this way. Good tomorrows won't mean much if I die today. He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. [This message has been edited by GG (01-26-2005 03:03 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So I plead and ask and pray, "Let it not be like it is..." Looks like we're on the same page, and it's not much of a consolation, that tomorrow is another day. Good write, GG~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Spoiled sore from age in youth, it wasn't s'posed to be this way. hugs and more hugs real ones if I could Maureen |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"counting down respectfully... This is all there is to this. Letters drip off of my tongue, sticky, and it's wrong to beg." powerful...your depth is amazing. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Quick and pointed. Poets against the war is redundant |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
powerful....yes, depth... yes...great write, yes! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's a lot more here than meets the blind eye...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I could make things better for you lady. sigh  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So much depth in this write. Very nice. I must agree with Alli4000 "WOW" Good one. JL  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Spoiled sore from age in youth, it wasn't s'posed to be this way no it isn't. hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sending my love |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ouch... hugs... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"Good tomorrows won't mean much if I die today" So poignant! OUCHIE! Killer line, GG--I love it! Hoping more sunshine comes your way, Sweet One. Have a good week, Alyssa. hugs, Cathy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
None of us should have been (or be) spoiled in any way, I guess it makes us . . . us, in a messed up sort of way. I have missed your words, Alyssa. Please be well. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
God this aches Alyssa.... here is wishing you peace dear gal... Hugs...may all of your tomorrows be better and happy... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Blues, bad page to be on. I hope the story gets better for you soon. Because you're right, the sunrise brings little joy anymore. Thank you for your reply... Maureen, thank you so much. Really... thank you.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Susan C, I'm honored you think so! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to reply It means a lot...RSWells, Thanks, sir. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
jellybeans, i've always loved your writing, though I guess it's seldom that I actually get around to replying... so those words mean a lot coming from you. Thank you. And I hope the best for you Sunshine, Unfortunately, yes. But nothing your eye couldn't spot. Thank ya...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ser, it's just life. In another 60 years or so I'll die and then it won't matter much anymore, will it. lol *sigh* ugh. Thank you and i hope the best for you as well...Alli, Thank ya Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
JL, I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you muchly. Raph, you're awesome. Thank you. hugs. Wish you'd write some more... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, thank ya, love ya...vlraynes, yeah... thank you.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Cathy, Thank you. I was afraid the line might sound a bit more dramatic than it was intended to, but I'm glad it turned out okay. The sun will shine here someday. I hope the days are bright where you're at. You have a good week as well. sue, all the, uh, shtuff... we go through makes us... us. But no, there are so many things that people go through that nobody should have to face. I hate that about life. Thanks for your reply, it's good to see you around these pages again... Take care of yourself.Gentle Spirit, your name certainly does suit you. Thank you, and I hope that all of your tomorrows are filled with peace and joy, as well.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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