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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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just this: I wish you didn't know I pray I could return the tithe and roll the salt back to the sea and take back all the breath of me that blew your hair just so - like that... if I could, I would you know for heaven it is just like this - cymbals crashing crescendo leaving trumpets perfectly curled within the crystals it's another morning tide as I dot the shore with green. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very pretty write |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, ya both paint the shores golden, if you ask your readers. (But je comprends, so hugs to both)  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The green adds color, every time without fail.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bittersweet |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
hugging you both... beautiful, Karen... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
 M and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
had to come back for another read...your writing is absolute and makes for an interesting value to all those who read... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I always say gather honey while you may Who knows what of another day. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
amazing. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all very kindly for reading. And? Well, some things ya'll don't get to know!  (Now who's mysterious?)  *special hugs for sweet maree* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
... wow |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hugging you both! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wished neither of you knew. The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all art and science. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There's e'er a bit of mystery within in the voice serenity... beautiful writing! ~tier |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks tiers...and I'm shaking my head. I hope my comment about "mysterious" wasn't misunderstood. It was just a joke regarding how vague I am in my writings at times, and not intended as a tease to our Mysterian Sharon. (k, Shar? okay.) I've been working on being a little more accessible in my writing, and I fear I failed in that regard, and maree certainly deserves better than my meager offering here. I'm a mess. sigh |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
its lovely Karen....and very soft spoken... ~~*~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen, you know she knows you know that you both know and THAT is what this is all about, so plbbt! As soon as I read this, I saw you both, on her shores, her lighthouse writings, alive, waves crashing and the both of you running along the shore, smiling and laughing. Relieved . . . It is most beautiful. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is sooo very beautiful K and I believe you got your message to Maree across just perfectly and that is what counts m'dear. you both. |
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