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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-22 12:55 PM

Blinded

The last straw...I sip from,
the one that is cinched
to let in no air...
It is there that your words
have been sucked into
and those of mine say
"I no longer care."

When the notion of loving you
becomes an ocean of twisted threads
when the words are "bigger than"
and the song becomes titled "To Dread"

There are no words
that can take it away...
the hurt of the uncounted kind.
So the threats of replacement with others
is sewn deeply into this mind.

The last straw...I sip from
leaves a poison taste
to the tongue.
Untitled, this heart that once loved
even though, just because,
maybe, perhaps... no longer
is one to be won.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-01-22 01:14 PM

wow....this is fantastic.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2005-01-22 01:28 PM

sad the way it seems to go like that ... but it's so true though isn't it

wonderful writing

If you continue
to think
what you have always thought
you will continue
to get
what you have always got!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-01-22 01:38 PM

The last straw...I sip from
leaves a poison taste
to the tongue.

it blows, when it has to be so harsh and bitter, no redeeming value in the initial good feelings and expectations about the person.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-22 02:53 PM

It is really good to see you writing like this.

Dave

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-01-22 03:24 PM

SEA, thank you for the read and comment...sometimes the lack of emotion from one can make me lose hope.

Rex, so nice to see you..I hope you have been well

sometimes it is just in my imagination, these feelings I feel or lack, may be my own fault of being too sensitive and not the result of the real.

Michele, it's those expectations...I have to learn to not have any ~~
I like how you can always read between my lines...thanks

Dave, I always enjoy your comments.
Thank you for being here.

M

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry