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vlraynes
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0 posted 2005-01-22 08:46 AM




Flipping The Bird



You flipped this bird right off his perch
I’m hanging on by twig of birch
I’ve always done just what you asked
I mimicked you with every task

And now you leave me hanging here
I ask you why ~ I want to hear
Could it be something that I said
What was the reason that you fled

I only spoke the words you taught
And echoed back your every thought
I was your puppet on a stage
Ventriloquist’s dummy in wired cage

So, come back, dear ~ don’t fly the coop
You’ve really thrown me for a loop
What’s that you say ~ you went for seed
I should not worry ~ there’s no need

I thank my lucky stars you’re back
While in your care, I nothing lack
You are the wind beneath my wings
You are the tune my bird brain sings

You’ve flown into my little heart
I knew I loved you from the start
So, read my beak ~ I’ll tell you true
The bird you flipped has flipped for you


-Vicky L. Raynes
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Yet another repost... just because...


© Copyright 2005 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-01-22 08:50 AM


Loved this! Loved it, loved it, loved it! LOL! This just made me smile and laugh. Wonderful poem vIraynes.

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-22 08:51 AM



...I remember this one!  
And it still created the biggest smile!

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3 posted 2005-01-22 09:05 AM


vlraynes
Now that is what I call a talking parrot.
And I might add an excellent poet.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-01-22 09:25 AM


that's cute
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5 posted 2005-01-22 11:24 PM


LMAO!!! I'm saving this!!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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california
6 posted 2005-01-23 02:34 AM


this is great


Dark Angel
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7 posted 2005-01-23 04:54 AM


Smilin wide here Vicky...glad you reposted.

love it!

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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8 posted 2005-01-23 06:26 AM


and just because....I had to respond to tell you how much I enjoyed this

*smiling*
M

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