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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-26 10:16 PM

something about you in black
with just part of a smile
and the pale skin there
some french word
that says don't get caught
looking but if you do
just smile and say lovely

the imagination below
the window sill
as you look at me
and say things with your eyes
about coming back later
when the sun is down
and so is the music

love words seem small
to cover all the opportunities
I can suggest there are
but they make you smile more
so I spend them like nickles
in the slots in reno
trying to win the prize

you move your lips then
to say something sensual
but we just kiss instead
and realize the something
about you in black
has made us need darkness
to move our exposed intentions

into much deeper conversation

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2004-10-26 10:19 PM

and realize the something
about you in black
has made us need darkness
to move our exposed intentions

into much deeper conversation
***************************
now that, was niiiice...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-26 11:09 PM

I like this D - and all it says - sensual and yet, romantic - beautiful - most sigh worthy -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-27 07:25 AM

this takes the reader by the soul into a deep yet, realistic holligram of what is happening...you are extremely good at writing feelings and keeping the readers attention, wanting more then one poem a day from you. Fantastic penning sir....

Good morning!