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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-01-18 09:19 AM


Dawn, sky blue bleached in black,
rising from REM recondite.
Silence within, another day begun,
cold is the morning, wind waves.

Agenda known, blueprint realised,
seen written on a blackboard in
my head. Begin work, thoughts drift,
new horizons, sudden heartache.

Glow in the half light,
shops trade in drizzle,
life continues, through grimy gloom.
Tension assailing head, dreamworld yearned for.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-18 08:59 PM


Sounds like Monday in the fog, the grind of a city job...but the dreamer's mind wanders to a different scene.  
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-01-18 09:13 PM


what a scene
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-01-18 10:40 PM


Yes it is lonely and cold, without love...cold on the outside and empty and cold on the inside....

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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