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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-10-26 04:10 PM


I wrote and lost some words I wrote a long time ago but they formed a basis of a lot of I have written since including starting the Hawk and The Lady, and I found the time to rewrite.

A singer sang and her words as I can remember them and getting them wrong, is admitted.

It’s a long Dusty Road
I get weary, down, and old
Moving on
Moving on
Like the branch on a tree
I keep wishing to be free
Moving on
Moving on
There’s a place in the Sun
And before my life is done
Going find me that place
In the Sun

The singer was Sandy Posie and the chorus of the song no matter how badly I remember it is hers and that was the motivation.

Dave

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Sun dusty in the vision of walls baking in the sun
Voices echoing in anger shouting
Vines broken over bricks dangling for something, they tell a story
On a dusty road with it’s run off drops of earth red baked
To match the crops
Dried in the fields allowing no yield to other than barren

On a road overlooking a road in the hot sun
Women swung picks in purpose quietly
Leafs in a jungle by the road broken by umbrellas
Marching from a housing block in a jungle
To a Buddhist shrine
In finery

By a wire fence
A twelve-year speaks 5 languages
And jokes in all 5
For his friends
And we are his friends
Even if we can not change his life

By a dockyard wall
Portions of chicken for a 2 mile walk back
And jokes as we wait
In a temperate air
We eat and talk
In pleasure

In a town
Where they sleep outside of the store
Books of value line their shelves
For knowledge
We need to
Absorb

Behind 40 foot walls
I run the assault course 6 times every morning
Clean my boots
Cooked
And shut away to think
On polishing my thoughts

Think for a moment
What motivates
Punishment
Ideas
Or a CD
That gives you a beat

The world is a long dustry road
We get down, tired and old
We move on
Like a branch on a tree
We keep wishing to be free
Moving on

There’s a place in the Sun
And before my life is done
Going to find that place in the Sun
Going decorate my words
From a washing line
To be heard

Going to find that place
In the Sun



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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-10-26 07:20 PM


"By a wire fence
A twelve-year speaks 5 languages
And jokes in all 5
For his friends
And we are his friends
Even if we can not change his life"

Poignant, profound thoughts found on this dusty road.
Enjoyed the walk.

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-10-26 07:36 PM


Thanks Midnight

I should mention that some of this was 1967 - 1969.

It wasn't recent.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-10-27 05:17 AM


I was born in 69, so it's funny that I want to go back to the 70's. The best decade of my life.

Yes, I was at my prime when I was 9 years old.

Enjoyed the trip back Dave, thank you.

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