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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-17 11:19 AM


loneliness
is a little less lonely
because of you

you stepped into my world
with your lover’s talk
and passion’s press
searching my soul
then holding out your hand
drawing me close

and

i feel you

your skin inside my own
minds melding
hearts meeting . . . and
beating in time

yes, love

loneliness becomes a little less lonely
with you

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-01-17 11:23 AM


so soft, so beautiful...

so lovely Susan.  It is wonderful when we
have that loving feeling.  As always, I enjoy your words and song.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-17 11:45 AM


your skin inside my own
minds melding
hearts meeting . . . and
beating in time

yes, love

loneliness becomes a little less lonely
with you


and it is from those times that I believe Life calls directly to us...reminding us of the deeper whys and reasons

exceptional write

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2005-01-17 11:49 AM


if I had the words
I would spend them there
on your moments

if I had the moments
I would spend them there
on your words

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-17 12:06 PM


Donna - thanks dear -

LeeJ - yes, and thank heavens for that - thank you kind friend

Dark - your moments are as gold to me -

Love you all -   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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