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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-01-16 02:00 PM

Bonsais,
warm stews,
and bananas
greet and treat
both eyes and tongue,
when aged to mellow perfection
beneath a friendly filtered sun,
where thoughts age gracefully
with thyme to spare,
and today’s saucy thoughts
blend well with the stirrings
of yesterday’s offerings.

Well seasoned pots can soothe
the appetite of a savage beast,
while slowly peeling back the layers
reveals a tender-but-firm softness,
a sweetness both tongue and mind
can cherish.

~bon appetit~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-01-17 12:47 PM

Good grief, a feast for the eyes this was, and light as a feather too, we can't have it sinking now can we? Up she goes for a poet's palate.

Carpe' Diem

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-17 12:52 PM

What wonderful rythm to this Kacey and
bon appetite indeed!!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-01-17 01:35 PM

LOL, thanks, ladies. I thought for a while, this one may have been a 'rotten' post.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-17 06:58 PM

Y'know, I just ate...
but this was some wonderful
dessert...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2005-01-17 07:48 PM

Dessert, smeesert, yeowwww, splendid
preparation of succulent treats....

Excellent imagery, thanx Kacy

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

6 posted 2005-01-17 07:52 PM

a very SWEET piece!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-01-17 09:13 PM

got my knife and fork, can you spare a napkin? could really dig in to this

very nicely done -

Susan

btw - had to laugh at the replies

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-01-17 09:18 PM

LOL, me too, smiling and chuckling.
Thanks friends!
bon appetit

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-01-17 09:53 PM

liked this one Kacy

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2005-01-17 09:55 PM

glad you enjoyed Dixie, and thanks for reading and signing the oaks and seas write

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