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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Collapse isn’t the word for it Womb of soul gave way to secrets Like a match flickering, at first Then, a twilight self conscious prayer Who knew how to translate French novels? Into 3 dimensional languages You caught the flow of harvest On frequencies unabridged Arching a sweet death of Coupling fingers on skin Polished by sweet hangovers Taking us hostage Rushing to get to work Like a hysterical women I, the new adventurer Smashing head on into nature And a great white hunter Particularly attuned to the mystics Of unhooking my bra While writing spring time sonnets About out of body experience We rented water taxies, fevered by the sun Visiting abandoned islands of paradise I fell from the top floor of your Aegean Sea Into forests scented with green pines Where hours wandered mortal In white ermine coats Furiously scribbling music In the back of your throat So you could light the dark with flames Bringing me within 3 feet of the edge Hotwiring our passion to slender curves There, I lay tenant to your arms What now seems like a trillion years ago Did you know about photo enforced traffic lights? Cuz I awoke one evening in your mind |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Did you know about photo enforced traffic lights? Cuz I awoke one evening in your mind *********************************** oh day-um...Lee, this is remarkable! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
LeeJ I will say this with a sensitive heart. Sorry Officer I didn’t see you On my car bonnet Your dog On my windscreen as well Cleaning it thoroughly The weather is hell Yes I thought the wipers were thick But it looks happy and it does like your stick Yes I took the corner A race Are you sure Gone with no trace Yes I do see the street sign Behind my car Well It looks fine No I don’t ever look At those cars behind It unnerves them Crossing the road all the time No I wasn’t on fire Or a cabby on speed Chased up the jungle Or direly in need Your suit is unusual But the cut is devine Rips seemed tailored And coloured like wine You wan’t a ticket Just give me a second There’s one hanging Dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh my god, this is fabulous...WOW!  More please  Mxx and I am haunted |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lee, as always, you offer the reader some incredibly vivid imagery. * seeing flares* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
  and I am haunted |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We rented water taxies, fevered by the sun Visiting abandoned islands of paradise I fell from the top floor of your Aegean Sea Into forests scented with green pines Where hours wandered mortal In white ermine coats Furiously scribbling music In the back of your throat So you could light the dark with flames Bringing me within 3 feet of the edge Hotwiring our passion to slender curves There, I lay tenant to your arms What now seems like a trillion years ago While reading this, I suddenly felt an inner tremor ..... it surely happens only when I am "involved" in an outstanding read. Love, Margherita |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I fell from the top floor of your Aegean Sea Into forests scented with green pines Where hours wandered mortal In white ermine coats Furiously scribbling music In the back of your throat ~*~ You do manage to paint some lovely scenes... which I enjoy, very much. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Well LeeJ, this is one for the top 10. Outstanding originality here. Just an outstanding write LeeJ. wayne If nothing is something |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed..James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow...... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
We rented water taxies, fevered by the sun Visiting abandoned islands of paradise I fell from the top floor of your Aegean Sea Into forests scented with green pines :applause: and take a bow always a pleasure taking a seat and watching your mind's theatre |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This tops everything! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“We rented water taxies, fevered by the sun Visiting abandoned islands of paradise I fell from the top floor of your Aegean Sea Into forests scented with green pines Where hours wandered mortal In white ermine coats Furiously scribbling music In the back of your throat So you could light the dark with flames Bringing me within 3 feet of the edge Hotwiring our passion to slender curves There, I lay tenant to your arms What now seems like a trillion years ago” So many visuals in this verse. Enjoyed Lee J. JL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the things we do in our heads headless are the best of our best effortless this was hot lady leej |
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