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choshi
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0 posted 2004-10-26 10:36 AM






Such is this life,
the emptiness of vast sky:
infinity revealed-
as passing clouds leave glimpses
beyond leaf-burdened tree limbs.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-26 10:49 AM


Paul, this is gorgeous!
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2 posted 2004-10-26 11:52 AM


niiice blend of word to image...

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LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-10-26 11:53 AM


how georgeous, both the pic and poem...
thank you for sharing

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4 posted 2004-10-26 12:20 PM


absolutely beautiful writing chosi
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5 posted 2004-10-26 12:41 PM


amazing Paul
im just lacking the words today

choshi
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6 posted 2004-10-26 07:51 PM


Thank you dear friends.....Dawn, lacking in words?????  [well, as long as it is just for today]   ~P
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7 posted 2004-10-26 10:25 PM



Such is this life,
the emptiness of vast sky:
infinity revealed-
as passing clouds leave glimpses
beyond leaf-burdened tree limbs.
***************************************
the sky hangs her storms
upon the battered branches
freedom is ringing
as the clouds release old ghosts
she is free to roam

choshi
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8 posted 2004-10-27 05:34 AM


Such is this life,
the emptiness of vast sky:
infinity revealed-
as passing clouds leave glimpses
beyond leaf-burdened tree limbs.
***************************************
the sky hangs her storms
upon the battered branches
freedom is ringing
as the clouds release old ghosts
she is free to roam

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~~~

Beyond battered limbs
stripped bare by turbulent winds
naked in passing-
the moon returns to fullness
as ink-dark clouds drift and fade.


[This message has been edited by choshi (10-27-2004 07:11 AM).]

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9 posted 2004-10-27 05:34 AM


oh, that's pretty!
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10 posted 2004-10-27 09:21 AM


a beauty to wake up to, thank you Paul
the photo and words match perfectly

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11 posted 2004-10-27 10:22 AM


What a lovely post! A treat for the eyes and the soul!

Autumnal morning hugs,
EA
Leaf

choshi
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12 posted 2004-10-27 10:29 AM


What a lovely post! A treat for the eyes and the soul!

Autumnal morning hugs,
EA

Thank you EA.....    Back

~P

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